Black cat black cat
With not much leg strength how can you run so fast?
Black cat black cat
What is wrong with a nice relaxing bath?
Black cat black cat
Are rats your new chew toy?
Black cat black cat
What fish do you like the most?
Black cat black cat
How do you clean up your poo so cleanly?
Black cat black cat
How can you jump so high with such short legs?
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I like the rhyming scheme in this poem. It gives a nice rhythm to the words and makes it fun to read. “Black cat black cat, how can you run so fast?”
Something that could be improved is the use of more descriptive words. This would make the poem more interesting than just a list of questions.
A question for the author could be, “What is your favourite thing about black cats?”