The start of my story . Check point
It was a gloomy,foggy day on December the 6th 2023. Ethan is going to cross the Checkpoint ( the checkpoint is a border blocking Ethan so he can’t see the nice side of Brandon.) But today Ethan will change this no matter what. Can he do it ?
As Ethan got closer and closer he heard the solider blocking the entrance to the nice of Brandon shouting “ go away NOW !” Ethan hands get sweater and sweater as he gets closer he starts to get dizzy. This solider is well known for short temper. As Ethan gets there the guard looks at him and shouts “Next.” Ethan is too scared so he runs past the guard and surprisingly make it. The solider screamed “Oh you little …”
As he ran through the checkpoint he saw everyone was looking at him. Ethan had only just realised that there was more rubbish on the ground and building, but there is less trees, grass, mud and more.
Ethan is about to run to an abandoned fish and chip shop. As he is about to enter he bumps into a man, his eyes look like a devil’s eyes. Ethan thought it would be a good idea to run. So he ran to the old fish and chip shop and locked the door. In the building, he can see ; a old table ; rotten fish and rotten chips, and finally five dead body s in the kitchen. Then …
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