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Cobra by Dylan h

Outside a flash of lighting flew by Jorden hugged his coat he was scared he was in this strange place he had always hated the old chop house. The crooked old freezers stood tall above him he opened one of the freezers and rotten flesh fell on him now he stank he was so annoyed he let his curiosity take over so he walked off with a shadow following him. Then suddenly he heard a hissing coming from the vents. Jordan shouted “Hello is anyone there.” He heard no reply Jordan ran. Suddenly a cobra came slithering towards him. He then tried to run but he was at a dead end. Then the snake suddenly said “don’t run I won’t hurt you.” Jordan did not know what to do. Would you if a snake started talking to you. Well Jordan trusted it. One hour later they were at the dump.

 

One Response to “Cobra by Dylan h”

  1. Great job Dylan! fab work great puction and amazing describing words I love cobras! for next time maybe just make it a tiny bit longer but Good job!

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