Tuesday 7th March 2023
Lo I am learning to write a suspense paragraph with complex punctuation.
Lily looked around; somehow she had found herself on a mysterious planet. She was surrounded by peculiar sights: trees that took her breath away; grass, which was purple like lavender; and mushroom houses that looked like they had just been harvested but they had doors on them. She heard noises coming from them; the bushes shaking. She was way too scared to have a look in the bush. Then a mystery-causer came out of the mushroom…