blog challange



Tuesday 7th March 2023 

Lo I am learning to write a suspense paragraph with complex punctuation. 


Lily looked around; somehow she had found herself on a mysterious planet. She was surrounded by peculiar sights: trees that  took her breath away; grass, which was  purple like lavender; and mushroom houses that looked like they had just been harvested but they had doors on them. She heard noises coming from them; the bushes shaking. She was way too scared to have a look in the bush. Then a mystery-causer came out of the mushroom…

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