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Amber woke up; she had found herself surrounded in fluffy clouds.

She thought to herself if it was a dream, but it wasn’t. She stood up as her legs were jiggling from being scared. As she stood up she could see: stars twinkling in the sky; the sun rising up creating an orange glow; and clouds racing towards the sun. She slowly stumbled from cloud to cloud. Something made a noise , it wasn’t the wind or the clouds (it sounded real and alive). Amber’s heart pounded as she was confused about what was up here with her. It was a frost-dragon…


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