Hansel and Gretel


Tuesday 7th March 2023

I am learning to write a suspense paragraph with complex punctuation.


On a dark, freezing night, a poor woodcutter and his wife had two children, who were very naughty, called Hansel and Gretel. When they were younger their mother had died; Hansel and Gretel were very sad. Soon their Father remarried but their new bad-tempered stepmother

(Brunhilda) was incredibly cruel: she tried to convince their dad to abandon his children because they had no money to feed them; she seduced and manipulated their father for attention and to get the children into trouble. “Listen, man, tomorrow take the two children, give them both a piece of bread, lead them into the thickest part in the middle of the woods, make them a fire and leave them there”, said the evil stepmother. The father refused but She was not having it. On the next rainy, stormy rain, Brunhilda had the evilest plan to get rid of Hansel and Gretel…


No comments yet.

Please leave a comment. Remember, say something positive; ask a question; suggest an improvement.

%d bloggers like this: