suspense paragraph

Pin found many antiques: a mirror with a brown, shell themed frame; tea cups that have been used for centuries; and chairs on the verge of breaking. Exploring the old home Pin – who had never been in a house as creepy and old as this – was carelessly walking through all the rubble on the floor. Suddenly, a bang was heard from upstairs; she slowly walked up to find out what the noise was. But all she could see was more ancient chairs. Pin started to find the bedroom when he saw a shadowy-figure in the distance. Pin turned and ran past all the cups and chairs.But then she tripped over all the rubble… 

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