To use a range of punctuation.

We needed four things :a pick axe a, water, food and a helmet. The bats sounded like a range of things : doors creaking ,a snake hissing and scraping metal coming towards them quickly. The stone created a wall for ever it was impossible to get past it was endless . There it was … right in front of them . At the last minute it disappeared as quick as a flash.

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