Suspense
As me and Rachel walked down the dark , gloomy path beside the cliff edge .The water sounded like lots of things:a hurricane destroying a town ;and an ear splitting boom across the sky .Water was aggressively splashing at us whilst we strolled along the rocky road . That was when a huge wave slapped on the cliffside and splashed us in the face we were drenched from head to toe.”We should go .” exclaimed Rachel “ Definitely .” I said
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