To use cohesion and a range of different devices

Early one morning, polly and her friends were in a cave. Until suddenly ,they heard walking. They froze in shock as the walking came towards them quicker than ever. It was there … in front of them. All of them screamed in shock. As they screamed they all ran as fast as they could. However as they ran so did it. When they came out they went home and talked. They didn’t want to tell mom.

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