To use cohesion and a range of different devices
Long long ago there was a poor girl called Polly. Every day she would go on a walk to the park and round the ally through the bush and onto the bright green grass to a spot. This was called her secret spot. Furthermore she would go there very often. On a cold, icy and cloudy day she decided to go to her secret spot. So round the ally through the bush and onto the bright green grass. But this time someone or thing was there ‘hello”said trembling. Polly saw it, a beast …
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