persuade
Dear Transformer girl,
I am writing to you today to persuade you to retire from being a superhero and have a normal life like you did before. I will explain to you all the reasons why you should rest.
My first point is that every single mission of yours goes completely wrong. You have destroyed the whole city with your moves and when you try to catch the criminals your jetpack is way too slow; you can never catch them. You do not help the city at all.
I would like to argue that when your jetpack breaks the government have to pay for it, which costs over £50,000 and it gets to the point where they can not afford it. Do you want money to go to waste if it is just going to be broken again? The jet pack is hardly worth keeping as the only thing you do is travel on it even though you can walk, there is no need for this.
Furthermore, I am concerned that you are very irresponsible around the city, which is very dangerous. We believe you do not concentrate, there have been five crimes in the past week and you have managed to save only one. This is not helpful for the city; this is very unexceptable. This makes everyone scared.To build on this concern, some children have been getting hurt because of your actions; parents at home are very upset.
Although some people suggest seeing you transform into different animals makes them smile, we think that you should not transform into other animals. My first reason is that you have a limited time to transform if not you blow up and we do not want you to die. My second reason is that people get scared as they do not know if it is you.
To summarise, you do not help the city in any way shape or form. Not many people know whether to trust you or not. If I were you, I would retire from being a superhero and get a real job. I promise you that you would get a benefit if you get a new job. Please consider the points I have raised.
Your sincerely,
Miss fire.
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