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Persuasive letter

Dear Amanda,

 

I am writing to you to not give up your terrific superhero life and to continue fighting for our city.

 

My first point is that for last couple of months your salary has gone through the roof. The rest of your family are very proud to see their daughter achieving these massive goals. Won’t your family struggle with the bills? Do you want your family will have to be put into a council building so you can be looked after? Why wouldn’t you help your own city, with all these crimes? There is no one else that can reach your outstanding records as a superhero. I would also like to argue that you deserve to be an all-time star more than anyone else.

 

Furthermore, I am concerned that your grades will drop into the earth’s core but if you continue be that first class superhero, me and my team will try our best get the best piece of extra credit for each subject. Plus, you are the closest person to getting the honoured scholarship. You have also achieved many medals from competitions with the school P.E department team.

 

To build on this concern, I would like to point out that many people are concerned you will stop being the best fighter and questions are flying in through the post to the government about who will be brave and capable enough to fight for our country. On the other hand, man people argue that you should stop because you are just making a fool of yourself and that they are capable of fighting themselves and they don’t need a super heroes help. This is not correct, you are capable of fighting these massive crimes.

 

To summarise, we should you stop your amazing career and think you can’t keep up with these crimes continuously. Go out there and be the best you can be. Occasionally, we will offer vacations for breaks so you don’t over work.

 

Yours Sincerely, 

 

Agent Smith

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