Chapter Four:A Reunion
Chapter Four: A Reunion.
Jack asked what was on the paper, Mali replied I think it’s a map of the island. look the beach we landed on is called Magic Sands Beach and the church were in is called the ruined church. They went off to explore. A few hours later they came to the Old Village, it only had the remains of two houses. Jack looked in he there were dark shadows ever where. He thought he saw a flicker of light. Then he saw it a big human like hand reaching out to drag him in to the shadows. Then a big scared face appeared. It was the mother orangutan and the seagull called Jim. The baby orangutan (called captain Jake after their fathers name) ran to his mother.
A few minutes later they were all friends. Mali and Jack also decided to stay on the island and make it there home along with the animals. A couple of hours later they had set up camp and were sitting round a campfire eating fish with a beautiful red, yellow and orange sunset behind them. They were happier than they had ever been before.
really loved it please write more like this 🙂 You have a incredible mind I love it but i really think you should put in a little bit more detail.
Sebastian Finzean I like it
Lovley writing my favourite line was “Jack asked what was on the paper”.
Very casual names. Great Job !