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The Land of Sandy Shaw

 

 In the land of sandy saw

 

In the land of Sandy Saw, I found a sword sharp enough to chop trees.

 

In the land of Sandy Saw, I saw a ginormous house with sharp windows.

 

In the land of Sandy Saw, I watched a brilliant football game and Man United won!

 

In the land of Sandy Saw, I heard a loud bang.

 

In the land of Sandy Saw, I felt a big  tree

 

In the land of Sandy Saw, I touched a football

 

In the land of Sandy Saw, I sour  someone  sang

 

In the land of Sandy Saw, I captured a big bang

One Response to “The Land of Sandy Shaw”

  1. Hugo lancsroad 5B October 8, 2024 at 10:39 am

    I LOVE YOUR POEM IS AMAZING
    how can describe the poem more?
    i think you could use the word saw less

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