Goldenrod
Goldenrod.
My leaves are greener than
The soft breeze of grass. My leaves can
Be prickly so be careful. I should tell you about my
Twigs – they are slender as a snake with pointy ends
Like a spear. My roots are long and their colour is brown As a bear.
My branches and twigs wave in the melody of the breeze Like fingers brushing the keys of a fragile piano.
My trunk stands as straight as a soldier guarding the palace which is the canopy above.
Ryan
Stourport Primary
Starflower
The starflower glows as
bright and beautiful as the
full moon. The vivid green stem
grows faster than a shooting star
in the night sky. The bees buzzing
around the starflower collecting
the strong, golden pollen. The petals
are hanging on by a thin, weakened string.
The long, lengthy roots scurrying
through the dirt like a filthy, unpleasant
worm.
Lacie
Stourport Primary
French marigold
The stem is a thick as a newborn baby
And the pollen blows like glitter through
the air.
French marigold roots are as bendy as
worms. The marigold grows in soil as
soft as a pillow.
The Petals are as shiny as gold
and glow like the
moon at night. The
petals dance like little
ants at night.
Harry
Stourport Primary
Starflower
The starflower glows as
bright and beautiful as the
full moon. The vivid green stem
grows faster than a shooting star
in the night sky. The bees buzzing
around the starflower collecting
the strong, golden pollen. The petals
are hanging on by a thin, weakened string.
The long, lengthy roots scurrying
through the dirt like a filthy, unpleasant
worm.
Lacie
Stourport Primary
Creeping Ivy
Creeping ivy crawling along the creaky floor eating a crunchy bone.
In a creepy house its leaves are as green as grass and it is as spiky as a fork. The stem is as long as the m6 and as
scary as a zombie playing with a haunted doll that is
possessed and the roots are as red as human blood and as dangerous as toxic waste.
Josh
Stourport Primary
Moonflower
Moonflowers orchid looking like
Frogs’ lily pads, breathing
Like the nice cold breeze.
As the buzy bees stealing
Pleasant sweet pollen
From the marvellous pink, white orchid.
The fine soil so soft
It’s like playing in the sand
As orchids surround it.
As other orchids talk to each other
As leaning on a tree trunk.
As healthy caterpillars eat the small oak trees,
Leaves and butterflies fly around the orchids.
Matas at Stourport Primary
Lavender Lake
Lavender lake,
Blossoms purple dots,
In the shimmering moonlight stars,
It flutters petals,
As beautiful as the eclipse,
The stem is like a rat’s tail.
Standing through the
Stiff soil, the roots
Are like the electric wires
Running through
The underground.
By Dylan
Stourport Primary
Moonflower
Moonflowers orchid looking like
Frogs’ lily pads, breathing
Like the nice cold breeze.
As the buzy bees stealing
Pleasant sweet pollen
From the marvellous pink, white orchid.
The fine soil so soft
It’s like playing in the sand
As orchids surround it.
As other orchids talk to each other
As leaning on a tree trunk.
As healthy caterpillars eat the small oak trees,
Leaves and butterflies fly around the orchids.
Matas at Stourport Primary
The dog tree
My leaves were darker than
a shadow but in the summer
they turn red.
My trunk is stronger than
a rhino horn. My roots bend
and twist like cooked spaghetti.
My branches are like swords but
some of them come out like rats’ tails.
My bark is like a blanket all over me.
It keeps me warm and snuggly.
Tommy
Stourport Primary
The clear flower
The clear flower
Is as transparent as glass.
Its petals are frosty like
A cold winter’s day.
The roots are hair-brown
And are chocolate-coloured.
Its stem is as green as grass
And strong like a soldier.
A flower’s petals (or leaves) are
Windy like a tornado, blowing
And blowing through the day.
Children normally pick the life
Out of daisies and other flowers to
But i don’t want that to happen to
My clear flower.
Imogen
Stourport Primary Academy
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