Clear flower

The clear flower 


The clear flower 

Is as transparent as glass.

Its petals are frosty like 

A cold winter’s day.

The roots are hair-brown

And are chocolate-coloured.

Its stem is as green as grass 

And strong like a soldier.

A flower’s petals (or leaves) are 

Windy like a tornado, blowing 

And blowing through the day. 

Children normally pick the life 

Out of daisies and other flowers to 


But i don’t want that to happen to

My clear flower. 


Stourport Primary Academy 

One Response to “Clear flower”

  1. Imogen, your clear flower sounds beautiful – I wouldn’t want it to be picked either!
    I have noticed a punctuation error in the last sentence. Can you tell me what it is?

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