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11 Responses to “Impossible”

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    Will October 1, 2020 at 10:25 am

    I love the talking dog it just needs a bit more detail

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    Maisie October 1, 2020 at 10:27 am

    Nice

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    Blake October 1, 2020 at 10:27 am

    It was really good

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    Borys October 1, 2020 at 10:29 am

    I really Enjoyed reading your poem, Maybe Add a bit More describing words.

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    Courtney October 1, 2020 at 10:29 am

    I love short sentences .

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    Austin October 1, 2020 at 10:30 am

    Nice poem beautiful love it

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    Marlie October 1, 2020 at 10:32 am

    I enjoyed reading your poem but you mite want to add one last thing

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    Lily October 6, 2020 at 11:38 am

    Super good I enjoyed reading it please add a bit more!

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    Natan October 8, 2020 at 10:25 am

    Realy good i love the bit about the talking dog just try a bit more detail

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    Anonymous October 8, 2020 at 10:28 am

    I like it but you need just more details

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    Frankee October 8, 2020 at 10:30 am

    Love the slow plane part.

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