11 Responses to “Impossible”

  1. I love the talking dog it just needs a bit more detail

  2. Nice

  3. It was really good

  4. I really Enjoyed reading your poem, Maybe Add a bit More describing words.

  5. I love short sentences .

  6. Nice poem beautiful love it

  7. I enjoyed reading your poem but you mite want to add one last thing

  8. Super good I enjoyed reading it please add a bit more!

  9. Realy good i love the bit about the talking dog just try a bit more detail

  10. I like it but you need just more details

  11. Love the slow plane part.

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