My poem By Monty
You are a lost shoe
found in a muddy puddle,
Like a missrible jelly fish.
You are a squishy tomato
Squished into your fathers waistcoat.
You are the sun rising
opening its eyes and blinking.
You are the rainbows end,
waiting patiently
for the gold to rise.
You are a tap shoe tap dancing.
You are a lost goat,
calling for help.
You are a sunflower
waiting to be pollinated.
You are as strong as a snail
carrying its house on its back.
You are the end.
Lily
1. I like when you said about the snail
2. I wonder if you like writing poems because it’s really good
3. Maybe you could add a bit more description but other wise good
Well done