Finn
You are like a shimmering scaly fish swimming down into the ocean.
You are a black and yellow stripped bee with shimmering wings.
You are in a cage with an elephant about to be crushed.
You are as bright as a star glowing in the sky.
You are a fluffy bird flying in the night sky.
You are a dog ready to be hugged.
You are the football ready to be kicked over the wall.
You are a chocolate bar ready to be eaten.
You are a shark diving into a new book.
You are a post it note ready to be stuck on the wall.
You are suddenly diving into a pool of dolphins.
You are cold cement ready to be dry.
You are slime wanting to be made.
You feel a shiver run down your spine.
You are a cat curled up like a ball and you look like a full stop.
You are a bubble of bubble gum wining to be exploded.
You are a ship being crashed by a wave.
You are as high as a bird in the sky.
You are a doughnut about to be finished.
Hi Finn,
1. I love you are a post it note waiting to be stuck on the wall.
2. Why did you do bubble gum not a different type of bubble?
3. Maybe check your punctuation.