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The dream

You are the impossibility of:

Hot snow

a cold desert

And a watery rainbow

You are the ticking of a timer that is about to go off sending 1 million stars into the night sky.

You are the dreams of 1000.

You are the waking sun and the sleeping moon.

You are a cloud making all your dreams come true by the flicker of a light.

You are a jingle of a bell coming and going as your dreams take you away.

You are the sound of waves crashing against a ship wreck and taking it back to sea.

You are the sound of crashing thunder bashing on the clouds.

You are a forgotten dream left alone for all your life.

You are a bubble full of dreams and ideas.

You are a spider with all your brain power on your web.

You are a balloon with a dream to fly and touch the moon.

You are a bee humming its life story.

You are the moon going round the Earth

You are a door opening and closing as the wind flies through the house

YOU ARE THE END

 

 

3 Responses to “The dream”

  1. I really like how you used the phrase you are a bubble full of ideas.

  2. Hi,
    This is really good and you are a good writer.
    1. I really like the line “You are a balloon with a dream to fly and touch the moon.”
    2. Why have you written the word “dream” so many times?
    3. Maybe you could try and uplevel the word “dream.” And also perhaps you could add a bit more on the line “You are the dreams of a thousand.”
    Apart from that well done. Keep up the good ideas and hard work!!!👍👍.

  3. Erin@ Antony school ! March 11, 2021 at 10:32 am

    Thank you very much Sophie ! :):):)

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