12 Responses to “The future”

  1. .I like the part where you said or the survival of society its self .

  2. I like the way you said
    in a ugly world of lies

  3. Charlotte and Ryan I like how You used the phrase “in an ugly world of lies.”

  4. Obviously she’s talking about me and yes I am the hope that gives us life.

    • hahahaha yes Ryan you are brother. and charlotte i loved the bit when you said You are the burning and bright future,

      the hope that gives us life.’ bye

  5. Amber And Bella October 1, 2020 at 10:23 am

    I like the describing world blatant! Could you find a better word for ugly?
    Bella and Amber-Antony.

  6. I really like how you used in an ugly world of lies and your use of words is used very well, your really enjoyed your poem!

  7. I really like how your poem has a lot of excellent vocabulary And I like how you said in an ugly world of lies. This poem is amazing!

  8. I love the choice of words and the phrase ugly world of lies.Your poem is amazing!

  9. I like the part when you said In an ugly world of lies. Your poem is amazing.

  10. I like “the bright burning future” but it would be a good improvement to get a better word for “ugly”

  11. Your poem is incredible and I’d love to hear more poems. I love the bit where it says the hope that gives us life.

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