What are you
You are a cold ice cream melting in the warm sun .
You are a blue butterfly flying in the beautiful sky .
You are a juicy watermelon waiting to be eaten .
You are a sparkling star shining in the sky .
You are a fluffy cloud sleeping in the midnight sky .
You are a kind bee fluttering its wings in the sky .
You are a wave ready to be destroyed.
You are a rainbow dancing to the music.
You are a delicious lollipop longing to be licked .
You are a rose ready to be watered .
You are a dolphin diving into a new world .
You are a book waiting to be opened .
You are a soft lazy cat waiting to be loved .
You are a cute loving dog running free.
You are a cake ready to be demolished .
You are slime ready to be stretched .
You are a bird singing on the treetops .
You are a sunset ready to end the day .
You are a notebook ready to write down amazing ideas .
|You are a horse running round the world .
You are a scaly fish swimming in the deep ocean .
You are a book ready to end .
Hello there Eliza, you’re poem was really nice. A phrase that stood out to me was – You are a sunset ready to end the day – I enjoyed that especially. I would just say that in the line cloud in the midnight sky if ‘fluffy’ was a bit of a cliche. Also lots of your lines include ‘ … is ready to …’ perhaps you could think of something else to bring the same effect.
Otherwise a lovely poem, keep it up.
From Maggie SWW