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You are…..

You are the smell of the Gorm’s pungent breath,

splitting the night in half.

 

You are the memory of my grandma’s itchy jumpers,

on a cold winters day.

 

You are the beams of  the sun shining down,

awakening it from darkness.

 

You are the footsteps of the very first human,

leaving mud prints in their wake.

 

You are a cat creeping through the night,

hugging close to the shadows.

 

2 Responses to “You are…..”

  1. Natasha and Joe October 1, 2020 at 10:34 am

    Wow, that was very creative and the line about Borris Jonson was kinda funny. Why is the one about the very first human stepping in mud on their wake? That was really good and I’m not sure how you can improve it. Comment by Natasha and Joe from Ashurst.

  2. Natasha and Joe October 1, 2020 at 10:37 am

    Wait! Sorry I did that comment on the wrong poem. Sorry. Natasha and Joe

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