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A lost cat

You wander the forests dark.

trying to make your mark.

you hear a lark in the dark.

trying to make your mark.

you shout hark the angels of the dark.

be quiet lark.

oh angel of dark.

trying to make your mark.

hark the lark.

trying to make your mark.

you hear a bark in the dark.

trying to make your mark.

you shout to the angels of the dark.

be quiet lark.

oh angel of dark.

trying to make your mark.

13 Responses to “A lost cat”

  1. Robert Mellin SHCPChorley October 1, 2020 at 10:20 am

    Nice work.
    How did you do this good?
    Maybe rhyme a bit less.

  2. It is great because of the bit where you talk about the cat going into the forests

  3. This is really good I loved reading it well done .

  4. I like how you made it rhyme

  5. i like the cat theme and also well done for all the good rhyming i will like it

  6. BobbySHCPChorley October 1, 2020 at 10:32 am

    Nice reply Esther maybe add more though. Bobby

  7. The attention to detail is amazing in this descriptive piece.

  8. Great idia it was very creative!!!

    Have you got any more words that rime with dark?

    Try to describe how the angels look.

  9. Hi there,
    I like how you have rhymed in your poem.
    Why did you choose the title The Lost Cat?
    Maybe find some more rhyming words instead of repeating them.

  10. #1 We like how it all rhymes
    #2 How did you come up with these ideas
    #3 Try not to repeat lines in your poem

  11. I like how it was rhyming.

    Why did you choose that title?

  12. INTERESTING poem but um it was not my type im allergic

  13. Charlotte and Aleksandra October 2, 2020 at 10:28 am

    I like how it was rhyming.

    Why did you choose that title?

    add capital letters

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