3 Responses to “Mason and Kuba”

  1. Wow this is a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing it.
    1. I really love your description of a rocket flying from Earth like a meteorite.
    2. Could you use more animals to add further verses?
    3. Perhaps try using adjectives to describe the dragon.

  2. Mikolaj and Summer October 1, 2020 at 10:54 am

    1.I like You are a rocket.
    2.You could name the bird.

  3. very good poem’
    you can add more detail to the poem.
    why did you add simelies ?

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