You are a shining bird
tweeting,
on a gigantic beautiful tree.
You are a rocket
flying from Earth,
Like a meteorite .
You a frog
enjoying the beautiful day .
You are a butterfly
flapping away,
like a bird.
You are a dragon
breathing fire,
in the village.
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Wow this is a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing it.
1. I really love your description of a rocket flying from Earth like a meteorite.
2. Could you use more animals to add further verses?
3. Perhaps try using adjectives to describe the dragon.
1.I like You are a rocket.
2.You could name the bird.
very good poem’
you can add more detail to the poem.
why did you add simelies ?