My Poem of Different Things by Daniel
You are a giant ocean,as big as Russia.
You are a stripy zebra,making cheerful children laugh.
You are an amazing apple,as green as freshly cut grass.
You are a bright yellow banana from Africa,waiting for me to eat you.
You are Scary October,as frightening as the skull trooper skin.
You are a Marvellous Monday ,where everyone can start off fresh.
You are the number thirteen,everyone is afraid of you.
You are my wish to have unlimited money and v-bucks.
You are my reminder of my granny’s lasagna being as delicious as an orange lollipop.
You are the scent of a rotten banana being as abysmal as roblox.
You are the end,of my beautiful poem.
I really like the line: You are a bright yellow banana from Africa,waiting for me to eat you. It’s really funny and it made me laugh.
What does the word abysmal mean?
Can you improve the sentance: You are the number thirteen,everyone is afraid of you.