Pirates life for me.
You are a penguin skidding across the ice;
You are a pirate with a sunken rotten ship;
You are a math problem with a tricky anwser;
You are a cannonball waiting to be let loose;
Youare a rat exploring your new habitat
You are a penguin skidding across the ice;
You are a pirate with a sunken rotten ship;
You are a math problem with a tricky anwser;
You are a cannonball waiting to be let loose;
Youare a rat exploring your new habitat
I Like Your Poem from Ellen-SGJ
This is very creative I like the words you have used.
Did you have any help with this poem?
You could maybe describe the cannonball.
1) I really like the positive and the penguin part it’s really funny.
2) for the last one the rat what Type of habitat.
3) sorry if this is mean but you Could write more.
Bailey SGJ YEAR 6