What are you?
You are a meaningful rescue dog
that brought me a lifetime of happiness.
You are the sun, shining on Emma’s spanner
like a holographic pencil case.
You are the rainbow end
waiting for someone to dig up its gold.
You are the smell of a Kiwi
hidden in a teacher’s pocket.
You are the Bengal cat
that owns the sofa
whether you like it or not.
You are the forgotten wish
that didn’t come on my birthday.
You are the forgotten wish
that didn’t come on my birthday.
You are the memory
of my childhood,
that haunts me most.
You are the beginning, middle and end.
I really like your ideas,you had put a lot of thought into your poem.
Where did you get your ideas from?
You have wrote a verse twice, remember to check your work.
Hi I love your verses are very fluent and your words are amazing
Where did u get your inspiration for your kiwi line?
To improve I would probably say try not to repeat verses like u did with your birthday verse.