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What are you?

You are a meaningful rescue dog

that brought me a lifetime of happiness.

 

You are the sun, shining on Emma’s spanner

like a holographic pencil case.

 

You are the rainbow end

waiting for someone to dig up its gold.

 

You are the smell of a Kiwi

hidden in a teacher’s pocket.

 

You are the Bengal cat

that owns the sofa

whether you like it or not.

 

You are the forgotten wish

that didn’t come on my birthday.

 

You are the forgotten wish

that didn’t come on my birthday.

 

You are the memory

of my childhood,

that haunts me most.

 

You are the beginning, middle and end.

2 Responses to “What are you?”

  1. I really like your ideas,you had put a lot of thought into your poem.
    Where did you get your ideas from?
    You have wrote a verse twice, remember to check your work.

  2. Hi I love your verses are very fluent and your words are amazing
    Where did u get your inspiration for your kiwi line?
    To improve I would probably say try not to repeat verses like u did with your birthday verse.

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