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What are you?

You are the anger,

of a match lighting the fire.

 

You are the fire of the chilli,

dancing rapidly in your mouth.

 

You are the happiness

dancing in the field.

 

You are the fiery heat,

of a sun flying through the whistling air.

 

You are the tallest tree,

in heaven towering over the universe.

 

You are the touch of a silky feather,

floating down from heaven.

 

You are the smell of a a lavender bush,

sprinkled over you like star dust.

2 Responses to “What are you?”

  1. Xavier and Marnie October 1, 2020 at 10:27 am

    I like the line “You are the fire of a chilli, dancing rapidly in your mouth
    could you add an adjective to the word floating?
    Instead of just the tallest tree, name the tree.

  2. I really like the first line where the match strikes with anger. It builds an amazing picture in my head.
    I love your last line but how does lavender sprinkle over you?
    Maybe you could have added more detail to describe some of the lines.

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