What are you?
You are the anger,
of a match lighting the fire.
You are the fire of the chilli,
dancing rapidly in your mouth.
You are the happiness
dancing in the field.
You are the fiery heat,
of a sun flying through the whistling air.
You are the tallest tree,
in heaven towering over the universe.
You are the touch of a silky feather,
floating down from heaven.
You are the smell of a a lavender bush,
sprinkled over you like star dust.
I like the line “You are the fire of a chilli, dancing rapidly in your mouth
could you add an adjective to the word floating?
Instead of just the tallest tree, name the tree.
I really like the first line where the match strikes with anger. It builds an amazing picture in my head.
I love your last line but how does lavender sprinkle over you?
Maybe you could have added more detail to describe some of the lines.