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I really like how you explained how you danced and expressed how you were feeling
Good poem
What was good about it? pleas explain to the author why you enjoyed it.
1) I like how you put “You are a unicorn dancing and prancing up and down a rainbow.”
2)Why have you put unicorn prancing around a beautiful rainbow.
3)To make it even better can you improve beautiful in beautiful rainbow