You Are Poem

You are a singing sunflower,

following the glittering sun,

in the shining daylight


You are a shimmering,shining golden bar,

waiting to be grabbed,

as the pleasant people stroll by


You are the glimmering sun,

burning bright in the sky,

giving out light


You are a joyful human,

watching a rusty silver coin,

as it falls on the grimy, stained floor.


You are an intricate puzzle,

with a dream of being put together,

while the devilish humans ignore you.

2 Responses to “You Are Poem”

  1. Freddy.T and George October 1, 2020 at 10:27 am

    we really liked it

  2. Darci and Emiliana October 1, 2020 at 10:59 am

    1 We like the alliteration and personification.
    2 Why have you put 3 verses without a full stop at the end and 2 with?
    3 Try and use different words for shiny.
    This is a really great poem and we found it hard to get an improvement for you.

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