The bike
The bike is so old and rusty and the wheels are spinning like racing cars and looks like it has been thrown into a lake.
The bike is a old blue bike with a broken seat and a flat tire.
The bike is so old and rusty and the wheels are spinning like racing cars and looks like it has been thrown into a lake.
The bike is a old blue bike with a broken seat and a flat tire.
I love your amazing poem I really think it is great.
but I think you could use more punctuation.
could you next time think about your lines.
I like the old bike