The stray puppy roams the city, Waiting for an owner.
Sits at a tree, Waiting for someone to pass by and pick him up.
It is very dirty, Sat at a park wanting a wash.
Very thirsty waiting for his bowl to be filled With delicious water.
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1. I love the theme of this poem
2. I think you could maybe make it a bit longer
3. Does the stray puppy find a home in the end?
1) I absolutely love this.
2)Which city does he roam?
3)Maybe name the tree and city.
1.I like that the pup is waiting for his owner.
2.Why didn’t the pup look for the owner?
3.Maybe be more descriptive.