The golden bike by Theo 6J
The bike leans,
An old rusty tree swaying in the sun,
It’s handle bars stick out like cow horns,
As the paint peels of very slowly.
The wheels spun like when you bake a cake,
It sits there waiting for a best friend.
Crome peels of the bike as it starts to fad away Hoping it it will be saved.
Spiders webs shake as the wind blows the bike.
The rubber rusty wheels start to shake as it gets older.
Cogs click a rhythmic beat as you can here the
clatters of the chain. Pedals dangers waiting for a person to spin then like spaghetti.
The bell rings as the strong wind pushes harder then every before.
The saddle wait like a mushroom waiting to be eaten.
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I love the phrase Crome peels of the bike as it starts to fad away Hoping it it will be saved. Is crome a word? Instead of using the wind twice you could use some different weather. Please look at mine
Olivia SWW
Lily
Hi I love all your sentences including this one
The spiders webs shake as the wind blows the bike.
And do you mean fad or fade?
Well done
India SWW
I loved this sentence it’s sits there waiting for a best friend. Good job
Axel SWW
I liked how you used the phrase chrome peel’s of the bike.