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Gnome

The bumpy gnome standing still like a pole sat on the light;

The belt clinging for life on the birch tree;

The wheels holding the bike up is covered in mother’s nature’s green grass;

The silk white web is bouncing as the spiders crawl over it;

The handles bars as old as a cow horns;

The frame from ww2 is being covered in rust and moss.

9 Responses to “Gnome”

  1. Yes gnome good I like gnome . I bad at grammar

  2. I like the gnome.do have any one in your class got ps5 a lot of people write about it

  3. Omg amazing love your similes

  4. Hi and I really love your poem it’s perfect.

  5. The one that says the handle bars as old as a cow horns is really good because it has good detail and that u have used capital letters .

  6. Hello I think your poemmm is great I really love it congratulations!

  7. I really like the way you said it well done.

  8. 1)Good adjectives .
    2)How did you come up with such good ideas .
    3)Use more alliteration.

  9. I am not a gnoblin I am not a gnoll I am a gnome and you have been gnomed

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