2 Responses to “Seasons!!!”

  1. I love your poem I especially like the part were you say “blossom trees sway”. Could you improve some of your adjectives though like you could describe the mistletoe toe?

    good job !

  2. 1 I love the use of describing the scents and smells.
    2. Could you tighten it up a bit so it goes 5 7 5?
    3. Check for good flow so it sounds more ambitious.

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