Shed
The large shed stands
leaning against the rugged wall
forgotten and needs a friend.
The damp wooden door sits
like a big splinter.
The old roof is scratchy
like sand at the beach.
The window frame is as rusty
as an old,squeaky garden gate.
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I like how you can see that the shed is standing on your own because you say it needs a friend.
Could you take away “The” at the beginning of most lines?