the labador poem
You are a white Labrador with a nice white fur like fluffy snow.
You where dripping in sweat so you jumped in to the nice ice cold blue water and you where so fresh afterwards.
After you went to the shade to dry off and then after you went in the house to get food, Eating all the food with the sharp yellowed teeth.
Then jumping onto the most comfiest bed in the world to take a nap, After the exhausting day at the pool.
Waking up, You go searching to go get cuddles from your owner.
You do not need a capital letter after a comer
1. I like your description and your information.
2. What type of food does he eat?
3. your poem is good but you can improve it by putting more description.