Winter by billy R TJS
A frozen breeze chills all the glass .
Lumps of white glide in the air .
Frozen ice sits on a dying lake , cold as snow.
Frozen icicles dangle over the frozen tree branches.
A frozen breath drifts over trees leaves, frozen in suspension.
Smoke from a fireplace drifts into houses and defrosts the windows.
The winter freezes the heart.
I like how you used a short part at the end to create suspense where it says ‘The winter freezes the heart..’
I like how you used a short part at the end to create suspense where it says ‘The winter freezes the heart..’