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Winter by billy R TJS

A frozen breeze chills all the glass .

Lumps of white glide in the air .

Frozen ice sits on a dying lake , cold as snow.

Frozen icicles dangle over the frozen tree branches.

A frozen breath drifts over trees leaves, frozen in suspension.

Smoke from a fireplace drifts into houses and defrosts the windows.

The winter freezes the heart.

2 Responses to “Winter by billy R TJS”

  1. I like how you used a short part at the end to create suspense where it says ‘The winter freezes the heart..’

  2. I like how you used a short part at the end to create suspense where it says ‘The winter freezes the heart..’

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