Raging fires burn
Fireworks explode above,
Flames flicker at night.
Squirrels search quickly,
leaves erupt in tornadoes,
autumn colours flame.
A dying season,
autumn brings a blazing end,
winter’s quilts in place.
Fire-wheels spinning,
I hold a star in my hand,
marshmallows burn fast!
Raging fires burn
Fireworks explode above,
Flames flicker at night.
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Hi Brooke
I love how you have repeated the first line as the last line.
Why have you used “squirrels search quickly”
I don’t need to give you any improvements because it is already mindblowingly amazing.
Sofia and Dawid