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Autumn Haiku by Brooke

Raging fires burn

Fireworks explode above,

Flames flicker at night.

 

Squirrels search quickly,

leaves erupt in tornadoes,

autumn colours flame.

 

A dying season,

autumn brings a blazing end,

winter’s quilts in place.

 

Fire-wheels spinning,

I hold a star in my hand,

marshmallows burn fast!

 

Raging fires burn

Fireworks explode above,

Flames flicker at night.

One Response to “Autumn Haiku by Brooke”

  1. Hi Brooke
    I love how you have repeated the first line as the last line.
    Why have you used “squirrels search quickly”
    I don’t need to give you any improvements because it is already mindblowingly amazing.

    Sofia and Dawid

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