Amazing flowers,
Glimmers in the sunlight
Being fed by the heat.
Fireworks explode,
Pumpkins stare into souls
Never stopping.
White starts to fall,
New year celebration
Taking over cities.
Copper leaves fall,
Temperature dropping
Dark begins faster.
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I think this is excellent good job btw I really like the line “Pumpkins stare Into souls” I see a jacko lantern in the dark staring straight at me But I think you shall improve “Amazing flowers” because amazing is too overdone and people teachers plus pupils use amazing all the time that’s why I think you should improve on that anyways well done your a really great writer.
Hi Riley it’s Jack and Harvey from MrGs Emporium
We like the line “….Glimmers in the sunlight….”
The line Amazing flowers could include more description to build an image in the readers mind.
Keep writing!