The un solved Mystery of loch ness
Ishbel pointed at the old,Brocken abandoned castle.
“If we found the treasure under the castle, we
could buy food” said Ishbel.
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1. I like how you described the castle
2. why did you say its under a castle , why a castle?
3. maybe you could add a simile about the treasure.