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Contrasting Characters By Anabelle

Summer barged in through the door to her house. Outside the rain had been whipping in her face and the wind blowed her hair everywhere. “Mum, I’m home!” She shouted. “Hi Summer, how was your day at school?” Her mum asked. “Good thanks. What are we having for tea?”

Natalie walked in through the door into her kitchen, he hair soaking wet. “Hi mum.” She said grumpily. “Hi Natalie how was your day at school?”asked her mum. “Normal.” Natalie said grumpily to her mum. “Bring tea up to my room and then leave me alone.” And with that Natalie stomped upstairs.

Summer slumped down on her bed thinking about that conversation she”d had with that new girl Natalie. She kept playing it over and over in her head thinking what she should do… Meanwhile Natalie sat on her swivel chair and thought about that girl she had met at school today. “I wonder if she’ll do it with me” Natalie muttered quietly to herself. “After all she’s the only one I think I can trust.” She thought. Then before she could think any more about that she drifted of into a long, dreamy sleep.

4 Responses to “Contrasting Characters By Anabelle”

  1. Hi Anabelle I love your writing.

  2. Hi Anabelle
    1. I really like the line summer barged in though the door to her house.
    2. Where did you get the idea from?
    3. Can you tell me which room Summer was entering? E.g. Summer barged through the door Into the kitchen.

    Keep writing you are amazing.

  3. Hi Anabelle
    1. I love the line ….Summer barged through the door.
    2. How and were did you get the ideas from?
    3. What room did Summer enter?

    Always keep up the hard work! That’s what MrG says!

  4. Hi Anabelle
    Our names are Casey and Reu
    1. We really like the line Summer barged in through the door to her house. Outside the rain had been whipping in her face and the wind blowed her hair everywhere. “Mum, I’m home!” She shouted. “Hi Summer, how was your day at school?” Her mum asked. “Good thanks. What are we having for tea?”
    2. How did she barge through the door ?
    3. Maybe you can tell the reader how she barged through the door.
    Have a nice day. And keep up the good work.

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