Ava was tiptoeing along the room   .  Ava saw a shadow appearing she was silent. She was trembling with fear.Goose   bumps appearing . A  shiver ran up  her spine.   Hears still up on her neck  and her legs were non stop moving . She wished she was never there . She would raver    watch a toddler program than be were she was. Light flickering Ava body trembled with fright


Then a figure appeared it was a old man .It seemed like he was  accent but he was only 88 what was quite old .The old mans eyes where bulging his voice as sharp as a black crow .He was stomping towards Ava .”YOU!”

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