6 Responses to “helalalo”

  1. This is very good maybe next time try make it longer :).

  2. Your definitely in the Christmas spirit!

    • I like how it links to the song Santa clause.Could you tell me more about what Santa is doing.Next time remember to put more tan one sentence.

  3. like it but i agree with isabella. Was the he meant to be here? Really great poem!

  4. I like this lots well done!

  5. This good but I don’t know how it fits in with the dragon theme

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