School chaos

Mabel gently opened the headmasters weighted door, as she watched her feet shuffle along the ragged carpet. The headmaster, Mr angry, had petite eyes, and a colossal nose. He watched her in disgrace.

A short time after, Bob slammed open the door and thundered in, then he sat down in a strop, he sulked as he slowly slithered down his chair, and eventually ended up laying on the floor.

3 Responses to “School chaos”

  1. It was so amazing I like when mr angry stared in disgrace is sound like he was mad but disappointed

  2. It is a very descriptive story mr. Angry really good descriptions.

  3. It’s amazing I like the similes. Could you tell me more about mr angry? Next time remember to describe Mabel

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