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The shadows of the nature

One dark night, Lucian cautiously walked into a deserted village. Suddenly, shadows started to srouned

Lucian. What should he do?  He  decided to run through the black shadows. He found a dead body, it had blood oozing out of its mouth, vague pits of  skin disappeared of its body. Then bricks started  to fall, glass shattered. Lucian shivered.  He ran and ran with a dead body in his hands, his heart bonded, lungs burning… the floor disappear.                                                                                                                      

One Response to “The shadows of the nature”

  1. You have created some fantastically fear-inspiring phrases.
    Can you check your last sentence to check the sense?
    Think about using really short sentences to build a feeling of panic in the reader.

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