you can not hide
boo
” Come out come out were ever you are I smell your blood”.
” You can run but you can not hide”.
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I like the idea of a creature smelling someone’s blood to hunt them.
Do you have any further ideas to expand this for your reader?
Check your punctuation to separate clauses.
This is great poem this is what i like the poem
. the tittle
. I like the word boo
I like the way you said you can run but not hide
WELL DIONE