2 Responses to “you can not hide”

  1. Mrs K @ Quethiock November 26, 2020 at 10:28 am

    I like the idea of a creature smelling someone’s blood to hunt them.
    Do you have any further ideas to expand this for your reader?
    Check your punctuation to separate clauses.

  2. This is great poem this is what i like the poem
    . the tittle
    . I like the word boo
    I like the way you said you can run but not hide

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